Contest Entry Post

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This is my entry for Brenda Drake’s writing contest. Please leave a comment below, and check out the first lines submitted by the other participants as well.

Name: Linda Calderone
Title: Rolled-Up Streets
Genre: Mystery

She was definitely dead.

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4 responses to “Contest Entry Post

  1. Intriguing first line — I’m definitely curious about what’s next. Consider if you can go more active with the line, however.

  2. I’m hooked. it’s short, it’s to the point, and the word ‘definitley’ adds a touch of character voice without going overboard. Great job. No suggestions here

  3. Hmm. Who is she? and is she the m.c.? and where can it go from here if she’s dead? I’d read on, but for a first sentence only, I’d like to know more, like at least a name.

  4. Short and straight to the point. I like it. 🙂

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